bald eagle, eyes pierced
etched into frosted azure
lost in vigilance
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
Photo credit: www.funportal.com
A contest entry
- Haiku, write of Insects or Birds by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 29, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please feel free to let me know what you think.
Comments
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A majestic bird. I loved this haiku. Great imagery. Loved the picture.
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Thanks again.
Bald eagles are incredible to look at. I don't get to see them very often, unless it's at the zoo.
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Purdy
Now this is masterful display of a poem inmotion and I love how you incooperated the mighty Bald Eagle into yu0or poem. it flows so ebautifully ythr wording is superely clean and crisp and I just love it. very nice work and keep up the good work. -
fantastic
powerful poem about my favorite bird too. there is a beautiful lake near me that some eagles live behind. awesome to watch them soaring around. sends tingles down my back.
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Hi, Cindy!!
Thank you so much for your comments. I've written quite a few haiku in the last few months. I am so glad to see you on here again. I will have to drop you an e-mail. I've got school today, but fortunately only one class today. I've got 7 books that I have to buy at the college book store today. I can just feel my wallet thinning already.
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My favorite bird
You have done a wonderful job with this beautiful Haiku, the imagery is great as is the wording, form and counts......best wishes, Ken IBT
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Thank you very much!
The bald eagle is definitely my favorite bird as well. I'm so glad that you enjoyed my haiku. I have two more entries to work on for your contest.
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