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A color...

A color of stillness
Like an old book
Opened once again

A color of depression
Tears running down
From a broken heart

A color of dullness
A pencil that won't write
Cold jail bars

A color of winter
Too cold to go outside
Faces pressed against the window

A color of gray



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  • storiesuntold
    November 7, 2007
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    This was very good

    Very good through the whole poem


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 30, 2007

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    YEs, grey is all this things and more; liked the flow and the message shared in these lines - easy to read and understand what you are saying here.

  • storiesuntold
    September 30, 2007
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    Well written piece here

    Yes all phases of life has a color