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Do You See His Disguise?

He peeps behind big, slanted eyes
Trees hairy cover his back.
Captured by slumber,
The devil's lair.
Hideous monster no-one can see
Here upon the mountain flee.

Is anyone watching?
Do they see his disguise
"See" says the devil
"No surprise."

Author notes

I wanted to see something different in the photo and I did so I wrote about what I could see.

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  • Liquid memories
    September 26, 2007
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    well done. thank you for entering contest.