Key to luscious breath,
and pleasant emotions.
Love removed,
results in ultimate destruction
of all that is light,
neverending darkness.
Author notes
Prompt:"Take away love, and our earth is a tomb."
Robert Browning
20 words
A contest entry
- PIF 10x20x10 Quickie by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 26, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Unsung Prewrites by Shahrazad.
600 points, ended October 7, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A powerful piece! I do enjoy short poems, my attention is hard to keep but also I think a lot more work and thought go into them. You have done a wonderful job here. Best of luck in the contest!
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I do love short poems because although it is important to look at every word no matter how long the poem is, it is especially important to do so with short ones. Each word has to be carefully selected. I liked it. Good job!
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How true, without some form of love, it is destruction, whether self inflicted or not.
Nicely done take on the prompt.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
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Thanks for the comment
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this is a bleek outcome if one does not have love.
for without love, there is no true self in a black and white world.
Riftkin -
Oooo!
You've painted a black and white picture verse!
Wonderful entry - Good Luck in the contest!
Tang
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Thanks for the wonderful comment!
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Prompt: "Take away love, and our earth is a tomb." Robert Browning
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