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Epitaph



your words like a dagger
plunge into my heart
driving breath from me
without your love

my soul cannot live

 

 

 

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20 words

Prompt: "Take away love, and our earth is a tomb."

Robert Browning


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  • Liquid memories
    September 28, 2007

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    such expressive words of love. well done.


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    September 28, 2007
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    A powerful little piece. It says it all


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 26, 2007

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    Great take on the prompt. Says so much here, and too many times, truthful. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • intanglio2ring
    September 26, 2007

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    Love like Breath

    Wonderful!
    What a great entry - Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 26, 2007

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    now this is perfect for this contest
    you have done a miracle with the word usage.

    Riftkin

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 26, 2007
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    Prompt: "Take away love, and our earth is a tomb." Robert Browning

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