Even the earth has a heartbeat
Lava running in its vein
Encapsulated forfeited love
my heartache’s earthly tomb does reign
Author notes
Quicky 20 Worder
Prompt: "Take away love, and our earth is a tomb."
Robert Browning
A contest entry
- PIF 10x20x10 Quickie by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 26, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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such imagery hun xoxo in such wonderfully chosen words- I can feel the emptiness within the spirit of the words of the heart. Congrats hon on the silver xxx well earned xxx
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I can feel the bite of these words. A well done take on the prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck to you. Storm
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mother earth with her lava flowing veins
heat spoken here
but the truth when said that
my heartache’s earthly tomb does reign
speaks of pain that needs to be healed
Riftkin -
Very original and imaginative take on the prompt. Best wishes in the comp
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I feel the heat and the power in your words.
Good luck in the contest
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An excellent take off the prompt
Very creative imagination, nice rhyme and flow..best wishes, Ken IBT
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Prompt: "Take away love, and our earth is a tomb." Robert Browning
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good luck honey xxxx love ya bro xoxoxox
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