You make a believer out of me
When I look deep into your eyes
And it's there for all to see
You keep me bound and mesmerised
And the truth is plain to see
I love you more than anything
You mean more than the world to me
I'll give you everything
Your eyes of sparkling hues
Your kiss is just to die for
As long as I have you
I'll always want you more
These emotions deep inside of me
Can take my breath away
This love will last eternity
I love you more each day...
A contest entry
- Song Quote as Inspiration ~ Come check it out by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended September 26, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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Nicely stated take on the prompt. It speaks love from deep within. Beautiful writing.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
nicely done. hold onto that. It is the greatest thing you will ever feel. Love the pom, easy structure but sometimes those are the best. This could have easily made this to cliche but you did a nice job keeping it fresh and adding truth. nicely done.
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