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Sawllow It

Swallow,
choke,
bleed,
allow.

The World's a fucknig mess,
but I guess that's just life,
is it what we were put here to do?
Can you feel the suffering,

We play with blades,
and expect not to get cut,
We play with needles,
and expect not to cry,
We play with death...
and expect not to die.

Tell me we're gorgeous,
and tell me we're divine,
but the dark underbelly of the beast,
is just a lie.

We play with blades,
and expect not to get cut,
We play with needles,
and expect not to cry,
We play with death...
and expect not to die.

Bleed the pain that keeps you alive,
tell me it's love,
and i'll tell you a lie,
we can die together tonight.

We play with blades,
and expect not to get cut,
We play with needles,
and expect not to cry,
We play with death...
and expect not to die.

A drop of blood to seal our fate,
a drop of blood, and ounce of hate,
Don't hide...
I've got no soul to eat...
but I guess you can still try...

Allow,
bleed,
choke,
swallow.

I've only got one thing left to say...


Let's eat this World alive

Author notes

btw thats not xactly wat he sed lol

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  • whitewinged1
    October 1, 2007

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    You are not far off the mark with this piece Onr line in particular hit home with me because years ago i used to play,and play i did,hard. By the time i realized that i wasn't eating the world, quite the opposite it was devouring me.And fucking fast I went from 183 pounds to 126 pounds in just over four months was putting a half to a ball in my arms {or where ever if the veins were not collapsed } a day I had been playing for about two years but at the end , the time that i described above i saw the worst the world had to offer.And i decided to pull my head out of mt ass and live not become another swept under the rug statistic .Don't loose hope because without that false dream, we all die quicker.Hice, but sadly a true write. Bravo !! Well Done !!


    • dying-gothic-roses
      October 1, 2007
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      its about the world being fucked really...iunno i guess corey talyor inspired me...A LOT!


  • chasing rainbows
    September 26, 2007
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    I love it,
    good luck haha
    <3