I can take away your breath...
Maybe forreal maybe fake...
I am one you hope not to see...
No...I don't mean another little child who wants candy...
I could be real...
I could be fake...
You may have said you've seen me before...
and I may have said Trick-or-Treat...
But the ones you have seen before look nothing like me...
With the look of death...
I can make a grown man give out a shriek...
A good swish of my cloak gives the look of floating to take you..
Who do you think i am?
Some say Grim reaper..
Some say Angel of death...
Others say death itself...
If you think any of the above...
All I say is this...
Pray that when you open the door...
That I won't be on your doorstep...
That may be the last thing you ever see...
.......trick-or-treat?......
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 15 and Under ONLY ~ Win A Gold Membership in our Halloween Contest! by Amunet Wolfbane.
6000 points, ended November 14, 2007, 55 entries
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Comments
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Very nicely done. I like the creative edge of this piece and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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You have shown a wonderfully creative side here in this piece. And your use of personification is excellent too! You really have done a fine job with this write. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Ooh, this is very imaginative and I definately love the personification that you have applied here
well done!
Thank you for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck
Leander
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