Can you see me looking? , Did you hear a small bell
ring? I wanted to just show you
so please close your eyes and see.
Momma look before I go through these gates to heaven.
The young and pure earn their wings when God needs
small angels.
There so soft and I can really fly like I use to in my dreams.
so don't worry for me Momma , God gives the young their wings.
Author notes
Photo artist kittynn.deviantart.com
A contest entry
- QUICKIE Picture prompt by TwilightDazzles.
475 points, ended September 26, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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young and ignorant!
God gives the young their wings"a great statement sweet whisper....!The photo competes with your beautiful poem. congratulations sweet Delane for the trophy!
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This is a really beautiful poem
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How precious this piece is Delane!!!I really love the pic, it is perfect for the write!!!
GBY
Silverbutterfly
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Simply lovely! Children are the most precious items in our lives. In their presence you just can't help but laugh and smile with every minute that passes you by. I love how you put this together and brought this picture to life! Congratulations on you trophy dear poet!
Jeremy0826 -
SO SWEET AND COMFORTING!!!!!!!
The children who leave this world before their time are indeed special little angels who bring to us much peace and joy.
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This is so beautiful it makes me want to cry. I see why it won a trophy; if it was my contest it would have been a different color.
Love,
Amera♥
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cool this was great
loved 5the pic too
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Please edit to being 10 lines asap, before the contest closes! Because this is a great poem, i would hate to dq
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Thank you I did
hope this is better
thanks for not DQ me before you asked -
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How about now
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