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Time Goes on Forever

A week to the day
until 3 years ago
i can still see
the orange glow
that surrounded you

If i chalked it up
to being scorned
i'd be buying in
to the lie you sold
to me all these years

i wouldn't mind
if we could pretend
to be what we were
before, two friends
forever until the bitter end

but the time has come
to make a choice
about what to do
can i finally voice
all the ways you've wronged me



I think it's time for me to say,
so long farewell, i loved the game

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i'm tired of trying to hold on to something you obviously don't care about anymore

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  • think of me x
    September 30, 2007

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    I think you're right
    And I'm very proud of you
    And he better read this
    Because I think he needs to learn that silence can hurt so much more than bitter words.


    • Riot Girl
      September 30, 2007
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      thanks, i really hope he does, because this needs to be fixed before i can ever help him with his parental issues