I can feel someone whisper to me.
The warmth of their breath embraces my ear,
Though no one is there.
“Enchanting.”
A feeling;
A feeling indeed.
Music, flowing through my mind.
Filling the spaces,
Enchanting.
Inescapable rhythms; indescribably melody.
Moving, in fluid motion.
Surrounding,
Enchanting.
A moment in life,
True serenity.
Author notes
This is one of those poems that just flowed from pen to paper without me actually thinking at all. It's strange when that happens, but I usually enjoy the outcome.
I love all sorts of comments; general ones and advanced critiques as well.
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I love peoms that just flow like you said its like your mind shuts down and ya hand knows wat it is doing so many times i have wrote like this and came with some of the best writes i think i have wrote, this was an amazing piece my friend as you would say enchanting
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Thank you!
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