Living the farm life
Corn is now the seclusion
Beans are seen over
Loss of privacy
The corn will be harvested
The wall is now gone
Sowing seeds once more
The mystery of the seeds
When spring comes again
A contest entry
- Haiku or any of their cousins by Wind Walker.
1500 points, ended October 25, 2007, 30 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great haiku
These are beautiful and connect together so well. Congrats on the gold.
All the best
Pozo
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interesting piece but love the form. This indeed holds ones attention. well done an dbest wishes to you in this contest.
Tory -
Very nice haiku chain. I think you what you are saying in the last verse, is that spring brings the mystery of their growth (the seeds) again. I like the way you describe the corn as a privacy wall. It sure is, when the stalks are tall!
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Very Interesting......
I've read it a couple times to get the better symetrey and the hidden meanings, It is so deep
Well done - Good Luck
B D -
Wonderful!
You've taken quite the inspiration from outside and harvested your own unique treasure!
I'm very proud of you!
Love
Dad
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well done my dear one, I know these feelings all too well growing up in a small farm community. The farm town I lived in even went dial telephones from olde time crank phones December 6, 1980. 5 months before I graduated high school.
My favorite lines of all were:
The wall is now gone
The mystery of the seeds
When spring comes again
Well done and best wishes always and in the contest xxx
Love your AP Aunt xxx
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