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Silence

The Silence I hear is Deafning.
With a voice ever so threatning.
My life is torn between truth and lies.
The DemonZ in my head decides who dies.
Silently I sit in a corner and quiver.
Not taking food not even a little sliver.
Sickening thoughts are all in my head.
THe Demonz always telling me that I'm dead.

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  • Darkside11
    October 3, 2007
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    Change it up a bit...The title should be 'Demonz"...and it needs to be longer.