Thrown upon thy feet;
Myself do I bequeath to you,
My sacrifice:
Overflowing pride drowning the voice of repentance;
Please, accept this as my confession.
Trembling lips;
Dare not allow damning words to escape.
Craven;
What I have become is all that I despise:
Betrayal laden lover;
Judge as I would unto you;
For,
No penance imposed could exceed that of my guilt.
Author notes
Contest - Inspired by the infamous "Wanka," form used by the legendary 13th Century Japanese poet Wi-Whan Wu. Thank you for reading. Any comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated.
A contest entry
- WANKA (NEW FORM) by Keith.
390 points, ended October 10, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I lyked this wanker a lot. I hoap the wanker Im gonna right is as goode as this won is.
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What a wanka!
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Phewwattawanka
Wi-whan himself would have been proud. -
Wonderful Wanka!
Wank on!
Good luck in the contest!
*PEACE*
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