One night deep in the Black Forest
A hunter padded over the new blanket of snow
Leaving traces of paw prints
Fallowing the scent of the hunt
A deadly predator
But also a leader
Weaving through the trees
Head of the pack leading the rest
White as could be
A quiet sentinel protecting friends
A wolf I am
Two eyes watching you from the trees
Author notes
Name: Leigh
Age:12
A contest entry
- Age 13 and Under ONLY ~ Be an Animal! Tell us about it! by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended October 15, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ages 13 and Under ~ Enter your best prewrite by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended November 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - One Whole Year by Death of the Author.
600 points, ended November 13, 2007, 49 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For kids 6-18 Judged by RedwingSpirit.
425 points, ended November 10, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Become a part of my AP Family :) - PREWRITES ALLOWED by MaMa-2-be-Cindy.
550 points, ended November 30, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ages 13 and Under - Prewrite Heaven 2 by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended December 7, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I really like reading this. It leaves a beautiful, haunting image in the mind. Very well done
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A creative write, thanks
I assume your would opt to want to be my AP sister if you win, but please let me know
Cindy
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Excellent work . I really like the imagination and imagery put into this one. Good luck in my contest
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Good poem but I'm afraid it doesn't fit the topic for this contest. This is for poems about your favorite animal. Is a wolf your favorite? Also I stated clearly in black and white in the rules I don't want anything involving hunters or hunting. Sorry but this poem is disqualified.
Brian -
Ooh, You have done a fabulous job with the personification of a white wolf here I absolutely enjoyed every single line of it
Thank you for entering the contest, and the best of luck to you
Leander -
third wolf so to speak
very creative write, love the way it reads, starting out yu tink one way and by the end another.........joe
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Ooo I love the ending, it's spooky and sens chills down your spine. You think you are watching the wolf, but in fact they are watching you...I like it!
Your imagery is vivid good luck in the contests and take care x
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This is a good write. It sounds almost identical to what a wolf would do. I hope that you keep writing I'd love to read more.
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Beautifully done. I can see this played out before me very keenly. Great job on this :D
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I love this!
PERFECT!!! this is a master peice!!! this is such a beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!!!!
you get 6 thumbs up and some smiley faces for this work of art!!! 
*heart* Ok who cares about these things anyway! I love this poem so much it PERFECT!!! I love when you wrote A hunter padded over the new blanket of snow,Leaving traces of paw prints
Fallowing the scent of the hunt!!! what a great poem! im book marking it -
Whoa! This poem is WICKED AWESOME!!! You did a really good job on describing the wolf. I especially liked the line "a deadly predator, but also a leader." SOO AWESOME
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