A brutal clout deepens
Ethan's facial gash.
"Horrifying!"
"Icky!"
Justin keeps luring multitudes
nearer, openly provoking
quarrels-- reassuring some
that underground violence
was XI's yield's zenith.
Author notes
Eeeeek... that wasn't really coherent.
XI = Xavier Institute. X-men, anyone?
General plot: A fight is happening between someone named Ethan and another unnamed character. Meanwhile, Justin is trying to get people to come watch so he can make a profit off of bets--to get them to bet, he says it's in XI's history, that XI has made a profit before off of fights ("XI's yield's zenith" was an attempt at fitting in that last part).
Failed coherence!
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Comments
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No, it's not failed coherence! It actually makes sense, and with the extra explanation, ....it's awesome! It flows naturally-- up to the last line
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