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Inferno

Wanton my eyes drink her in lustily
her supple curves ignite my souls desire
on sheets of silken dreams, I surrender.

So sate my lust on such bliss artfully
enfold me in your forms eternal fire
look upon your body, coy splendor

to whet this old-mans dreams so completely...
You rack my body, rake the coals entire.
So let mercy fall from your supple lips

enfold me in your dreams of heated flesh,
As I so twist, a feather inside wind;
submerged within you I am lost, eclipse...

Your legs enfold me with your arms enmeshed
lay me low, with your burning grace chagrined...


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  • Riftkin gold member
    October 15, 2007
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    this is sweet and loving
    not sure on the form
    but to me it is good

    Riftkin