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Never Let You Go

Shun me, hit me, i`ll still love you so.
I never want to let you go.
Kick me,scratch me, out of spite.
I wont even put up a fight.
I hope you know i love you so.
For this i`ll never let you go.

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  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
    November 8, 2008

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    this is amazing
    I like it hehe
    very short and to the point
    awesome and why I am still up lol it's like 6 am oh well why I am telling you this *shake head* I am so slow lol anyway out standing work


  • wishing-well
    May 22, 2008
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    im so srry i did thoses things. . .


  • MelissaLynn
    April 18, 2008
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    damn shawty thats some hard shit there. i like it lol


  • Celticmoon
    October 24, 2007
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    Thank you for taking the time enter my contest and good luck to you!

  • Mercury Rising
    October 8, 2007

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    Short and sweet and very vulnerable and honest. A real pleasure to read. Welcome to AP, and keep up the excellent work!

    Mercury Rising


  • Despairkitty
    September 29, 2007

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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!

    I thought you did a good job with this. Sort of a tough love kind of situation. I am a greeter and wanted to welcome you to the site. Feel free to ask me any questions.
    Despair


  • vampyrus90
    September 28, 2007

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    Really good poem! Its strange how a person can hurt you, just by not returning your feelings. And even then you'll still always love them.

    • wishing-well
      September 30, 2007
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      Its strange how a person can hurt you, just by not returning your feelings

      Darling I do love Dashed Hopes1992, i just hit him when we fight!


  • Lady Australis silver member
    September 27, 2007

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    this is really cute welldone for your frist entay
    welcome too the site

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 27, 2007

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    This is really good.Thank you for sharing and goodluck in the contest.Welcome to All Poetry also .Best wishes and much love.


  • wishing-well
    September 27, 2007

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    OMFG!! I LOVE U!

    I will never leave u, i love u with everything I am!! U mean everything to me! I could never ever ever live without u! Just thinking about me and u not together makes me not want to live! ur my everything and i love u for it! There is no one or nothing in this universe that makes me happy but u! I love u!!!!


  • Androgyneric
    September 27, 2007
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    O.o NICE! I like it! Why do you look so familiar??


    • Dashed Hopes1992
      September 27, 2007
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      i should hope i look familiar.
      FYI i haven written poetry in years and it was a on the spot kinda thing. i dont like it and i thought i could hide it.

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