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The first step

This is our house
in bricks and mortor
no castles in sand
this is ours to cherish

This is our hope
our only keepsafe
from vultures to friends
let us banish these scars

This is my heart
You've always kept it
please don't doubt it
I only have one

This is my life
We're here for the long journey
Let us not regret
the years that will pass

This is my love
I'll always be here for you
If you need me I'm here
There's no need to ask

This is our Scampy
All she wants is our love
She has more kindness on four paws
than most people have on two!

This is our home
Our first born, our heritage
Let's shelter in warmth
And protect it from harm.

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  • carole21
    January 22, 2008

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    very nice

    very nice poem . . liked "this is ours to cherish" and "Let's shelter in warmth" . . creates a nice feeling for the reader and a sense of sharing . .