Little angel little angel,
please hear my plea.
I have a favor to ask,
but it's not for me.
I need you to give some love,
to Miss Betty Jane.
Then I think that she might ask,
for you to do the same.
See her daughter is missing her,
and she's feeling really sad.
I know what she's going through,
for I also lost my dad.
Little angel little angel,
please hug her very tight.
Cause I know if Alice could,
she'd hug with all her might.
Tell her that she is missed,
her daughter's trying to be strong.
Although she is replete with pain,
and her face is rather long.
Please ask her if she might,
visit Alice in a dream.
Then she'll be in wonderland,
and feeling so serene.
Author notes
Written September 30th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Please Cheer Me Up by SEA angel.
250 points, ended October 2, 2003, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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cool
i really like this poem i love that movie alice in wonderland it is a good movie and you did a good poem you are a awesome poem writer you will always succed lots of love mini-desire
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beautiful
how beautifully sweet, the flow is exquisit, i dont know what more that i could say about this poem. how i envy your way with words and how it seems so easy for you to write. must be cause your so talented.
this is a wonderful poem, and i wish you luck in the contest, again im not sure if this contest is still open, but this is really beautiful. thank you for writing and posting this. im sure that the person that you wrote this for appriciates this wonderfully written poem, more then you will ever know. ~Julzzz~
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Sam , most that I have read of yours so far seem to have so much compassion for your fellow human beings . That to me is a look into a beautiful unselfish heart . keep up your writes , they warm my soul:0
Reenie
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This was such a beautiful write!! I really love the little angel. You are a talented poet Samplette. Keep up the great writes and good luck in the contest.
~~Mary Anne~~
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Five Star***** Triple A+++plus
This poem is very well done and just made me very happy to read since it had my mother's name in it. She'd be so honored and I'd like to believe up there in heaven is beaming with a big smile as big as mine right now. Thank you so much. Godspeed and best wishes 24/7 and always henceforth and forevermore. I hope a little angel hugs you tight too and that you have dream a special dream doing favorite fun things with your dad tonight too. Amen
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