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Your Life

When my times all run up
I see my end is near
Caught in the dark
Hold on tightly to me!

When God takes my world
Flips it upside down
And throws me to the side
What will I do?
What would anyone do?

See your end
Fight for your life
See your demise
What will you do?

I shall hold on tightly
Do my damnedest to hold on
Walk right up to God
And take it to his ass!

What will you do
When your end is near
And you are alone?
Will you bow down
And give up your life?

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  • Awnoewa
    September 29, 2007

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    I don't know what i would do if I saw my end...probably eat chocolate...mmmm...chocolate...this is a good poem. It raises a lot of tough questions. Good that your holding on. always best.
    I love you,
    Angie