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Brick Wall

Missing image
Hurt lays heavy on a heart
it can't cover your eyes
to flaws
only seems to magnify them.

At this moment
you loom large
a bold thing
 I can't touch.

Do I want to?

You seem to
grasp at me,
digging in the
reserves
I want to horde.

Hide the valuables
this soul
and heart
pain is coming
and nothing can stop
this train wreck of emotions
not even the wall you
are building

Each brick only serves
as a reminder of what
was and should be.

Love.

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  • Frozentearz
    September 26, 2007
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    Man I know everytime I visit your page that it will tug at my heart and soul, and gives me a dose of reality the ending to this one is so perfect, How we want to blow those bricks up don't we,
    Big hugz your way.
    Tearz


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 26, 2007
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    "You seem to
    grasp at me,
    digging in the
    reserves
    I want to horde."

    Perhaps because they know the Mother Lode lies within, my Friend... Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    September 26, 2007

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    "You seem to
    grasp at me,
    digging in the
    reserves
    I want to horde."

    Perhaps because they know the Mother Lode lies within, my Friend... Wanda


  • arafura gold member
    September 26, 2007

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    was...

    Very deep and thought provoking my dear poetess! I can feel the emotion in every word. and moving just behind the words I sense the hidden meanings! Great work Cat!


  • tara wilson gold member
    September 26, 2007
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    "Each brick only serves
    as a reminder of what
    was and should be.

    Love."


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