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Sue me for love!

Whiter than a garland of pearls,
Cooler than the moonshine fine,
Is your smile cute and charming,
Making my desire alarming!

Running like a stream of a river,
Flying like a bird in the sky high,
My thoughts on your beauty travel,
While your whispers of love my ears reach!

Your lips coral may hide the smile,
But ,twinkle in your eyes wide, beguile!
Brightest star in the night sky high,
Makes me think of your beauty in shy!

Our footsteps on the sands wet
By the sea side,in walk,when we met,
Make the memories fresh and
Refreshed is my mind in gay!

Sue me for love with your kisses,
Pursue our love case non-bailable
Imprison me with utmost courtesy
In your embrace tight , every night! 

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Thispoem is dedicated to 'sue cardwell',the poet laurate at A.P.

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  • Li snuffles
    October 11, 2007

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    Imprison me with utmost courtesy
    In your embrace tight , every night
    => my favourite lines in the poem

    you show such emotion in this poem.. i love it it captivates how someone feels when they are truely in love<3!!!!

    I wish you all the best you're very talented


  • ceegeeess
    October 2, 2007
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    Thank you very much for your lively comment. If you are to sue , I prefer to lose the case as I shall be fined many kisses and hugs to youlol


    • Li snuffles
      October 23, 2007
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      sue sue sue sue sue sue sue!!!!

      its an uproar a revolution.. i can see it now....


  • Marlo Thomas
    October 2, 2007

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    Let us all SUE ceegeeess for all the love in his heart bank. I am sure it is worth millions of kisses and hugs. LOL


  • ceegeeess
    September 27, 2007
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    Thank you dear sweet friend for your nice comment.yes, i too love the sea shore and the sands. It is really heart warming to look at the horizon where the sky and the earth meet. By that we shall be remembering our friends in the far off lands.


  • angelica silver member
    September 27, 2007
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    Very nice tribute to your friend Shankar.
    It's always nice to walk along the beach.
    Joan.


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 26, 2007

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    Thank you Shankar for this lovely tribute, I feel honoured that you have written it for me after our talk today.

    Thank you again my friend

    Sue

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