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the timer

I cant escape this brick
that is over top my head
pounding down my problems
breathing off my airs

and i look into the bathroom
seeing clothes amound the floor
the bath with a ring of dirt
and the walls no longer white

and i stare into my bedroom
the fan under a layer of dust
my window sills with crumbled leaves in them
and my floor full of creaks

and i become lost
like in the pennsylvania tunnel
the lights are out
and im in between meters of pitch nothingness

i know who i am
just some girl that gave up love
lost all of her hope
and realised what she wished would never become true

we are all with out feelings
just reactions of the past
the future is just a script
just something we chose upon to act

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