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Candy Coated Acid Trips

Rainbow colored screams
Cyanide sprinkled dreams

I can’t get out of this colorful daze
Ever since I’ve met you life’s been a haze

A rainbow is what I see through my eyes
I’m once again screwed over by your candy coated lies

Blue, green, purple, darkness
Your unique charm I’m losing I’m hopeless

My pale face glows
When I’m with you it shows

Laugh out loud if you please
Make me drop to my knees

And now I feel like I’m lying on a bed of nails
It’s all just a blur my body feels quite frail

I love you♥
I hate youxXx

Life feels like an abandoned highway
Life’s full of giggles, what else can I say

Author notes

[with/dugs/come/tears]
xToxicxCupcakesx...thats my username...I think thats what you meant!

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  • God is my reality
    October 5, 2007

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    Wow. This is so cool. It's shows mixed emotions and confusion. It's beautiful. You expressed yourself in such an open way. Excellent write


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    September 26, 2007

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    ♥

    ha, yea babe that is what i meant by putting your name,

    but anywayz the poem was amazing, i loved it bunches 4relz it was a great wright, thanks bunches and love lots..xoxoxox