I've got the kind of hurt
That you can't come to explain
My heart is filled with anger and regret
But mostly filled with pain
I find myself falling out of love
With an extremely amazing person
And I loved him more then anything
I promised never to hurt him
But you came along
And I guess you were convenient
But I grew feelings for you
And it kills me that I mean this
But I know you wanted to use me
Frankly I wanted the same
I now find myself crying over you
To me this isn't some game
Now I can feel dirty looks
Even though I haven't been seen
People being cold and heartless
People being so mean
I felt such a connection with you
Like we could really be together
I was so happy with you near
I looked at you and saw forever
But I lost you before I had you
And now it's killing me inside
You've got my head all screwed up
And this pain I cannot hide
Author notes
The world is a cruel place. I hate being in it. =[ [9.25.07]
A contest entry
- Pain and Depression by thedevilsgirl.
475 points, ended November 16, 2007, 55 entries
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That's really good! ( =
I can kind of relate. Good luck with everything and good luck in the contest!
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I felt such a connection with you
Like we could really be together
I was so happy with you near
I looked at you and saw forever
But I lost you before I had you
And now it's killing me inside
You've got my head all screwed up
And this pain I cannot hide
i like the part "i looked at you and saw forever"
this is a really good poem miss kimberrr.
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I agree with thedevilsgirl, great expression, many will relate to it. Good luck in the contest!
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