I realize that i am reading
Find my eyes at the end of the page
But its thoughts of you im breeding
I feel locked up, as if in a cage
I try hard to concentrate
But words and letters slip
All i think is your touch so delicate
And of the sweetness of your arms keep
I try to push the dreaminess away
Try to make sense out of studying
But in my mind i replay
Love words you so often say
I get angry with myself on the outside
Tell myself STUDY YOU FOOL!!
But from myself i cannot hide
The smile and the giggle, and the eyes light
Joy from memory of our being together
Fills up my body until my throat
My heart feels light as a feather
Ant it rejoices at the pleasing thought
Thought of you love
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Im just in love that should explain it : )
:) jus comment
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aww, this is so cute. This is a nice way to express the way you feel for someone in cute terms.
yeah my thoughts get jumbled like that too sometimes, and haha I do get mad at myself trying to push thoughts like that away also.
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Yes, that sure does explain it :].
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I really enjoyed this poem. I smiled when you said "Tell myself STUDY YOU FOOL!!" I know this feeling, that's probably why I got poor grades. One can always study, but love needs our attention.
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Beautiful and very loving poem for the man you love! You have really done great writing this...you really are a good writer so don't under estimate your skills my dear friend!!!
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This poem is even more adorable then Blessed hun! You have a very cute way of putting words to your thoughts and I really do like that.
Keep up the cute writing - Merosa
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bravo
Ah, soooo very roooomantic! there is some great cadence and flow her...very well done, indeed! bravo... bravo...b ravo..
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heres the applause
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very nice
just came here to return the favour - on your reading my poem "beggar Angel" I like the content of your poem - heartfelt - the rhyme seem a bit forced and the flow is great - perhaps the word "breeding" could be "breathing" - keep on keeping on - Bless God - Joe -
yes, this is a great poem
Well done. Love is a great thing and I think once you find it, don't let it slip through your fingers. The flow with this poem is really good and the imagery is great as well
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This poem is great. It flows really well and shows emotion too . A well written poem, Well done, and keep up the good work
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Wonderful
A wonderful write you have here and yes there is nothing like it so enjoy to the max
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Bask in the sunshine
but study too. In later life you can always fall back on your OWN artistic abilities and education, etc., but one NEVER knows about a loved one... will they one day turn cold, or be tragically taken before their time? Life is too capricious to be taken lightly. Learn as much as you can as fast as you can and establish your independence. It's great if the person of your dreams will stick with you for the rest of the ride, but having been an indecisive, excuse making, wretch of a person myself, I wouldn't be too quick to become totally dependent on someone else.
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you are totally right, and i agree completely, hm, when i was five i promised i will never do what my mother did.she married at 18, had her first baby at 19. depends on my dad. follows his decisions. so i promised i will get married not earlier then twenty eight. but i can still love him right. ? ? but career first definately. and independence. always.
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simple, fast and beautiful ...bt the 'locked up in a cage' part... hmm thers no key 2 d lock..u can unlock it anytime n get out... bt if u get out..dont go for long or else ur love will b locked in d same cage lookn 4 u :
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