Alone in reverie
My time spent restrained
A longing for any someone
But Silence is golden
Author notes
16 Word Pic Prompt - Valdar Cuebiyari
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired by HeavenScent4U.
300 points, ended September 29, 2007, 16 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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I thought this poem was interesting. I thought it was actually very very interesting and I had to look at the contest to see what the picture was. I can see how this would meet up with the picture && I have a question. Did you intend to make silence with an uppercase letter?
Nice write.
I think the uppercase letter makes it sound importance though. Good write.
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Thank you very mich for your comment. I apologize for taking so long to answer your question. I believe that I originally intended "silence" to be capitalized, but to be honest with you, I can't remember the thought process behind it. It's been a hectic past bit in my life, so much that I've had to put off the poetry writing. (which is saying something for me) Thank you again for your comment.
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wow, you don't know how close to home this nails the picture except for the last line. very well done. thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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