Crisp crunch beneath feet,
apples bruised from cruel falling;
Speckled fruit tree wanes
Author notes
AS REQUESTED: "This is a great form of poetry that flows from my thoughts, though the picture I see is greater, I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
In a list
A contest entry
- Autumn Haiku by InBetweenThoughts by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended September 28, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your wonderful Haiku, I can clearly see this as it is a carbon copy of my yard, apples lie all over and crisp leaves dance about, great imagery..you may want to check your counts on your second line, apples bruised from falling; as I am only counting 6 syllables
best wishes, Ken IBT
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