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Love a unwanted gift

Tomorrow never comes when I’m with you,
The candle that once burnt is no loner there,
My heart weaken from this feeling I have never felt before,
I wish I had foreseen and I’m not trying to sound mean.

But… I am more wise and the only one thing I truly know is:

Love is not a rose,
It is a weed;
Unwanted,
Uncared for,
And under-rated"

But here you still stand in front of me,
Even though the weed has taken over me,
My love is gone,
Roses don’t live forever, they shrivel up and die doesn’t matter how hard you try.

Here I stand, until the end,
I stand my word and everything I said,
I may die alone,
but this is not something I dread.

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  • James R
    September 28, 2007

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    awesome write little sis from start to finish I was drawn into it I am glad i have such talents in my family


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    September 26, 2007

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    This is such a great poem and just wonderful for this contest. yOu have done so well here to incorporate this quote into your poetry. Well done and best of luck for the contest.