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Eagle eye

eagle in the sky
pries at fish in the river
dives prey caught in paw

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  • Shantti
    May 11

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    This is very visually stimulating. I love eagles Eagle feet are talons though
    I love the way this is written. Thank you for entering


  • Pollycheck
    December 4, 2007

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    eagle in the sky
    pry at fish in the river
    dives prey caught in paw

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. I can visualize the eagle swooping down on its prey as I read this haiku.


  • yogi59
    November 12, 2007

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    Nice write . All the best for the contest.
    Eagles have sharp eyes and keen observation and they are perfect in catching the prey.Brought the scene before my eyes!!!

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 7, 2007

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    This is a great imgery piece here... you do such a beautiful job of portraying the images to the reader

    Karen


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    November 1, 2007

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    Eagles are quite beautiful,and to watch them dive for food, awesome picture,their are very few in our area,but to see what we do have is exciting, thank you for this entry and good luck..MM

  • InBetweenThoughts
    September 26, 2007

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    What a grand scene to witness, the eagle swooping down, talons ready on unsuspecting prey! Great imagery, form and counts. Thank you for your entry..best wishes, Ken IBT

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