Twin vases:
water-white and silent,
cupping Glories in porcelain hollows.
Invariable Dawn,
devoted to the arc of sky,
exhales Herself as light,
and,
like first breath,
your petal-lashes bloom,
proclaiming the virgin blush
of green eyes.
Author notes
The Glories mentioned are a reference to Morning Glories: a flower which blooms daily, circadianly renewing itself and reclaiming its innocence.
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enduringly delicate
How beautious..."water white and silent" and green eyes that see only innocence...see the entire world, and in it renewed, just like the morning. -
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Thank you for the read and kind words.
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Simply Gorgeous.
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the words 'virgin blush' bothered me...but thats probably just me.
excellent write.
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"Twin vases:
water-white and silent,
cupping Glories in porcelain hollows."
So beautiful - I love the imagery of the ending as well..
"your petal-lashes bloom,
proclaiming the virgin blush
of green eyes."
a great ode to green eyes...which I have ..lol
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Very pretty
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