Passions play
with a fingered tango
as lips explore zones
uncharted.
Wanton urges rise
from feathered temptation,
releasing a melody
of moaning sighs in sync
with a quickened pulse.
Hearts and spirits collide
with voracity
in a climactic ovation
of rapture.
Author notes
prompt: picture and 'Lead Me Into Temptation'
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Quickie Picture Prompt by Touchof1der.
475 points, ended September 28, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Eroticism of high standard...classy I should say! Brief but pithy....Shows a special treament of words...What a write! You're wonderful, sweet lady!
Galaxy2
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Well, I should say this had better have won GOLD!
Where's Kimberly?
Beautiful, sensual, climatic, and yes woman! You get a standing ovation! Loved this!
Mom
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awww so prettyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!! Beautiful picture and beautiful words. So wonderful. And you won a gold with it!!!! Fantastic! No surprise there. You're just brilliant! XD
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Very nice
Congratulations on the gold trophy for this piece. Truly a lovely use of those common sexy words that wrapped together make a beautiful and dreamy image of a moment. Well done. ~Pamela
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Whew! You took that whole "Lead Me Into Temptation" thing to heart didn't you! I do so like where your mind went with this. Darn your creative hide! Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
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