The school year is over, we say goodbye,
I hang my head, let out a big sigh.
Lot's of fun we had together,
time to face the stormy weather.
New life, challenges, await.
Author notes
prompt "Saying Goodbye"
Love You Tory.
In a list
A contest entry
- Short Poetry - Picture Inspiration. by Madison Mary.
300 points, ended September 28, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Goodbye? by writingismycure.
700 points, ended January 1, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The picture reminds me of my friends, the way your faces all shine of innocence. Well done. Thanks for your entry and goodluck in my contest.
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awww this was a beautiful take on the picture and it reminded me of when i left secondary school and left all my friends.
well done and best of luck
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Excellent write! It is always scary when we venture out in life, but there is a new life awaiting us...I really loved this, and felt you were able to express so much! 30 words! EEK that must have been tough!!!! If not you made it seem simple. Beautiful Job!
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Yes a really beautiful entry
All the best with this.
Gaylene
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Thank you for this beautiful entry...I really enjoyed it.
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very nice! made me think of a H.B. Stowe quote. a quiet sadness behind excitement and anticipation. well done Scott!
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Great take on the prompt. I was thinking of doing it before but my head hurts to bad. You did a wondeful job. good luck to you.
Love you as well
tory
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