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Psychotic

Were they real,

Or some illusion?

 

Years of memories,

Are they now un-true?

 

Experiences once gained,

Are they now lost?

 

Those tasks completed,

Were never really accomplished?

 

Friends who helped,

Were they thin air?

 

 

 

What can I do?

 

REALLY...

WHAT?

 

 

 

...

*BANG*

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  • Dragons Lady
    October 30, 2007

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    OMG. That end was unexpected. A very good write. So vivid and raw. Thought provoking as well. Keep writing.


  • Alittle2lost
    October 21, 2007

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    well... first impression is.. ouch. though the 'ouch' is not because it's bad. quite the opposite it's great. i know someone who's tried to kill himself, and i can see him thinking these thoughts. it hits close to home in a painful, Beautiful way. Bravo.


  • Tarja
    October 8, 2007

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    This is a very interesting piece. It's digging into someone's soul and listening to their frantic thoughts before suicide...that's deep. Lovely job.