Sitting here crying
The flowers you gave me dying
The moon and sun collide
My world has become nothing
You were my everything
And then you left
The flowers are dying
And I keep wishing
I'm wishing for you too come back
Come back home to me love
I know you won't
But I continue to wish
Wishing again
For that special time
Wishing again
Good bye
A contest entry
- Quickie Picture Prompt Contest by Touchof1der.
475 points, ended September 27, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh my God this is so good! THIS, my dear, is deffinately my favorite of your poems. And it's very relatible. Or was anyway lol. But this is so sad, yet so very good. I love this. Deffinately one you should have bragging rights too.
Megan -
I like the potency of the image of the sun and moon colliding... that's powerful as is the flowers dying within her grasp as the one loves departs. Very nice thoughts flow here. Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
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