A darkened room with no door
is the secret location as before.
Now the morning beckons near
as from the shadows his agents appear.
Very soon they're all informed
that the nation's white house was boldly stormed.
"The president's wife is gone
but we will get her back before too long."
This was the thundering voice
that told these brave men of their only choice.
"The impossible mission!"
was the mad retort to which he listened.
His reply "It's plausible . . .
we will achieve mission impossible."
Author notes
~Whitemaiden
My prompt was the old Television series Mission Impossible. It was a fun show. It's all about these difficult missions secret agents would go on. To normal people these mission would be impossible.
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