Ice chills striking down the kings spine.
cold ice freezing all feeling in his vien.
Mind numbing depression anesthetize all ecstacy.
Blunt force cracking the joy around the king.
Still the ice gets colder in his heart.
Frost forms in the feeling of the king.
His bitterness storms an ice age among his people.
The blast of frozen gems cover his once great kingdom.
The angel of death is presenting the kings apodsis.
Still the ice gets colder in his heart.
Catastrope is in all the sign but still he turns away.
This cold form of death has blinded the tyrant.
The king heart is at the blackest form of cold.
Now he is in a total mood of absurdness.
Still the ice gets colder in his heart.
The king is now an old man.
No feeling in the old king just cold and frost.
His society falls from is icey arena.
Finally from all his bitterness the old king dies.
The king is the man inside of me.
Please tell me what you think
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i had to read this a couple of times it was so well portrayed and i wanted to make sure i wanst missing anything. the image of ice worked and the end was tragic but real

