you found out my intent for the future
but one piece is still amiss
something so vital you can't help but obsess
you keep prying into places you know you shouldn't
but you can't help it
your curiosity is getting the best of you
is eating away at your very soul
I told you that when the time is right
all will be made clear
but until that day comes I can tell you nothing
you ask why not
I say because it will take away from the mystery
for years to come people will say
how did he do that
how is it even possible
but still you persist
and still I refuse
you keep on it till I can't take it any more
"you wanna know so bad" I say to you
"yes, I'll give anything to know"
hesatent to prove yourself
you contemplate if this is even worth it
"yes" you say to yourself "yes this is worth it"
finaly you fall to your knees and say ever so softly
"I give you my soul"
"good girl" I say with a sadistic grin
stand and hear what I have to say
you get up still thinking about what you just said
I whisper into your ear all that you wished to know
a smile comes across your face as you finaly understand it all
"ingienous!!!" you cry out
"yes" I say without loosing my composure "and know you are mine in body and soul for the rest of your days...
Don't care what you think so :-p
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haha....
did i read this one??
o.O
I DON'T THINK I HAVE!!!!!!
I FUCKIN LOVE IT FUZZ!
Kinda reminds me of a question i used to bug you about and STILL you have yet to give me that fuckin answer
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rather wonderful, leaving the ending open like that! I reminds of some of my own earlier works.
Have I finally found a master in the art of creating an atmosphere? I think that might just be the case...
zarokk666
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Oh gosh fuzzy this is great…you have me longing to hear the whisper in her ear
Wow you are amazing why do you continue to put off writing ?
Nicole
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Beautiful.
Big Brother, you continue to amaze me. This is brilliant. Really appeals to me. I especially love the second to last stanza. *Bows* Beautiful. -
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huh huh
Thanx just wanted to write and that's what came out
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