Strobing platinum and swirling neon hands,
Synchronized in hard house beats.
Projected images, trippy laser effects, - trances her out.
The DJ will not take his eyes away from her, neither will hers leave him.
500 BPM’s of love raving between them.
Cyber Rose a trip-hop Venus-
Every song the DJ spins is only for her, the deepest vocal trance tracks,
seem to be only for them.
Into the late night, still high of each other’s Ecstasy
He spins one last song for her, she keeps dancing only for him.
Never missing a step,
Under shining lights – tripped out by love.
Author notes
Option #1
http://s19.photobucket.com/albums/b185/specialStar/?action=view¤t=rose_bleu.jpg
This picture made think of the word "cyber rose" and from their I tried to creat a short love poem about lovers/Ravers. Think Raves and Techno music when you read this.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie 12 - 12 - 45Contest by Stardust-luvr.
700 points, ended September 26, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What About Love? by GypsyEyes.
500 points, ended July 30, 2008, 132 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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oh wow this was original! i love that! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! ~CarnalNineTailedFox
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Very good could have easily gotten a gold
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this kept me interested because I wounder what you picture as you wrote it because it gave me amazing imiggry It is an amazing write
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Hey...Just reading some poetry and was intrigued by the title of this poem and I must say, you have a very intersting mind. I viewed the photo and got the typical reaction from it (basically love) but you got something totally different. Makes me wonder what else goes on in that head of yours. Enjoyed the read and hope I wasn't a bother by commenting....I probably will be stopping by more often!
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an interesting take on the prompt with a musical twist to the effects kinda makes me think of the days of prom many blessings always xx best wishes xxx
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