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Sapphire Dreams

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Sapphire dreams whisper softly
upon a crystaline cosmos.
Midnight's diamonds etched within
my wandering mind.
Precious gems, sparkle and adorn
the galactic memories of past,
lighting a path for brighter futures.

Sapphire dreams blossoming,
from bud to beauty.
Igniting the heavens in brilliance,
star-dust trails spilling
hopes of what is to come.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    September 25, 2007

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    this is simply beautiful my dear and so well written, there is no best part to pick because it's all great best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

  • intanglio2ring
    September 25, 2007

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    Awww!

    This is so beautiful - using the heavens to light your way with experience from the past to hope for the future!
    A masterpiece!
    The best to you in the contest!
    Tang


  • Griswold
    September 25, 2007
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    oppssssssss


  • Griswold
    September 25, 2007

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    Beautifully written for this prompt, very smoothly and softly flowing. Best of luck to you in the contest...Scott

  • Riftkin gold member
    September 25, 2007

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    beautifully written and well spoken my dear
    you are wonderful, and I hope you know you are loved

    Riftkin

  • Stardust-luvr
    September 25, 2007

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    beautiful words for the prompt - sapphires are my birth gemstones true heart was put within this prompt.

    Sapphire dreams whisper softly
    upon a crystaline cosmos.
    Midnight's diamonds etched within
    my wandering mind.

    those words hit home to my spirit as I was just told tonight by someone special"have I told you how amazed I am when you dance beneath the moon, with the stars fighting to win the battle, to beat the sparkle in your eyes."
    many blessings always xx best wishes xxx


  • lostpoetess
    September 25, 2007
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    Such wonderful images this creates in the mind.
    Good luck in the contest.

    lost
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