Braille whispers of temptation spoken
from feathered fingers dance,
{a toe-stepped tango
along silken copper tones}
as ginger lips respond
to beckoning eyes cuing curves caressed
to breathless sighs;
and surrender,
comes from mutual sentiments
need not be spoken.
Author notes
prompt: starving
In a list
A contest entry
- QUICKIE 10 minutes, 10 lines, 10 minutes to judge... by Elvis.
300 points, ended September 25, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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thank you for your entry its beautiful
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Aw so beautifuly, Mum. Wonderfully written here. Your words always inspire me. I just adore your work.
And meh, I know, I've said you inspire me so many times!!!!! But it's sooooooo truuuuuuuuuuuuuuuue. XD -
Most excellent piece of poetry here, my friend!
Congratulations on the gold
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Congrats mum, well deserved gold here, as much of your work is.
Love always,
Lil
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A fine write and a well deserved gold for your mantle. Congrats!
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Love the language here... not sure if all is spelled correctly so I will assume you used spellcheck. If not, do it now...
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