I look at you,
so filled with love.
And wonder if you love me back,
and then...
"I feel wonderful because i see
the love light in your eyes.
And the wonder of it all
Is that you just don't realize how much I love you."
i want to see that light sparkle and shine,
I want to see that look in you eyes,
light my way through the harsh cold night.
And i'm so happy that you and I could have loved like this.
Because fairy tales don't happen often,
So when they do you have to take the chance.
You have to hold out your hand and dance.
I want you to hold my hand,
forever and ever again.
don't let go baby even though the darkest night,
hold my hand and through it my heart.
Author notes
hope the judge likes this
A contest entry
- Song Quote as Inspiration ~ Come check it out by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended September 26, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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You've said a lot of feelings in this, and it is full of longing. Wonderful take on the prompt, fitting it into your entry.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
I felt the love in these words. You did a great job following the quote and I think your last line was great. Good luck in the contest.
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I Love "becasue fairy tales dont happen often"
puts my feelings into words perfecty!
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