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Where's My Angel

Beautiful pictures flash through my mind
More than this world my soul goes blind
The only thing left is your face
Residing in a destructive but perfect place

In the heat of the fire I always feel cold
For to your kiss my love is sold
Evil tries to tempt me with other forms
But still I ignore even it as it performs

Loneliness died and my heart breathed
Ultimate pain and love was conceived
Every second without you I die
And every moment with you I try
To hold you touch and kiss on my skin
And never forget the darkness I’m encased in

Quicken my pain and increase my agony
Only in death can I be set free
But I will wait for the reapers soft love
To feed your addiction to beauty and blood

So forget the lies and listen once more
What was our romance created for
The answer is meaningless as long as you know
Now it is here I could never go

Loneliness died and my heart breathed
Ultimate pain and love was conceived
Every second without you I die
And every moment with you I try
To hold you touch and kiss on my skin
And never forget the darkness I’m encased in

Where’s my angel
I know I will die if I wait for him much longer
Where’s my angel
Only with him here can I grow stronger
Where’s my angel

Loneliness died and my heart breathed
Ultimate pain and love was conceived
Every second without you I die
And every moment with you I try
To hold you touch and kiss on my skin
And never forget the darkness I’m encased in

Author notes

Dedicated to pete
If things were run my way i'd never let you leave
xxx


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  • takemypainaway
    March 11, 2008

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    great poem...

    this is how hope prevails

    nice and trully good write

    thank you for entering!!

    **kat


  • Naridill gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    Beautifully sad. Your words show great depth and really enthral the reader nicely. Well done.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck

  • tremblingbluestars
    December 12, 2007

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    what a phrase.."The only thing left is your face
    Residing in a destructive but perfect place". i love how you put that one together..all the best..i dont believe my angel will ever arrive..


  • GypsyEyes
    December 11, 2007

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    Judge Says

    Where’s my angel
    I know I will die if I wait for him much longer
    Where’s my angel
    Only with him here can I grow stronger
    Where’s my angel

    This was beautiful. That part really touched me considering I feel like that a lot lately. Thank you for entering and good luck with the contest!
    ~Dommi


  • TheStupidLamb
    November 29, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry and good luck!

  • Liquid memories
    November 20, 2007
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    delightfully shared about your angel.f


  • Madk2007
    October 28, 2007

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    This poem was so filled with emotion i thought that it was happening to me.Its totally appropriate for this contest that is being held. Great Poem.Keep up the good work


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    October 28, 2007

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    Definetly packed with emotion and completly appropriate for the contest. I felt your need for him.
    Great work.
    Thank you & Good Luck


  • daviscth silver member
    October 28, 2007

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    This was an awesome poem filled to overflowing with emotion. It was almost dripping off the page!!!
    Good luck in this contest, Cathy


  • CherryOnTop
    October 27, 2007
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    It is truly impeccable!! Divine and graceful.Good luck in my contest.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 27, 2007
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    Great poem congrats on all the trophies goosd luck in girlish's contest


  • XInsanity-FairX
    October 18, 2007

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    this was truly amazing, it was written as so well it just flows of your tongue like a song

    and the emotion impact held within it is impeccable
    your choice of words and the repition, it just blew me away

    it was flawless
    and it brought tears my eyes
    i have an idea of how it feels...
    pain, hope, love, all mixed together in a destructive place in our hearts

    well done and good luck in my contest
    xxxx


  • Dlvvanzor
    October 15, 2007

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    Trying to hold their touch on your skin. Yes. Completely. Great write.

    Thank you for entering!
    -Dlvvanzor


  • beautyamoungblades
    October 10, 2007

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    i really like this you did really good with this.Thank you so much for entering i enjoyed reading this


  • Nicole Cudworth
    October 9, 2007

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    Wonderful lyrics that I would love to hear put to music... what genre were you thinking as you wrote this?

    Thank you for entering. Love and luck in all you endeavor.


  • Afflicted Affection
    October 9, 2007

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    I adore how you built up your emotions into one really good poem. I love these lines:
    Loneliness died and my heart breathed
    Ultimate pain and love was conceived
    Every second without you I die
    And every moment with you I try
    To hold you touch and kiss on my skin
    And never forget the darkness I’m encased in
    Great job, and keep up the good work....
    adding you to the pre-finalists.


  • Ignis Corpus
    October 7, 2007

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    wow this is a really good poem. i thought the flow was good,the poem over is well written. and i shall say good job and i wish you the best of luck in not only this contests with all the others ones as well


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 5, 2007

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    This was well penned poet.
    I thank you for sharing this with us.
    was almost lyrical.
    wonderful

    best of luck to you
    Tory


  • bonjourbunnie
    October 3, 2007
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    Good poem! Good luck in the contest.


  • warrior-eagle
    October 2, 2007
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    awesp,e!


  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 2, 2007

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    This sounds like that deep sort of love, not much of it left in todays world. Good luck in the contest


  • ixtli
    October 2, 2007

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    This is a good poem. I really like it! It's beautiful! Thanks for entering the contest and good luck!

  • Liquid memories
    October 1, 2007
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    thanks so much for sharing.


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 29, 2007
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    This is a good entry
    it almost read as a song...
    Love, Lane


  • SixStringDebauchery
    September 26, 2007

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    Thanks. I really mean it. Love you sooo much. I wish I was with you now. I miss you.

    Love you
    xxx


  • Richard III
    September 26, 2007
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    i love this poem its very good and smexy keep this work going

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