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To You

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I work my way to you
in our beautiful garden of green
and beg of you to lay me down

The purples and pinks of spring
are in full bloom
and the red is my gift to you,
ripening.

That look, that tilt,
the turn of your head
is all I need to come to you.

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http://isacg.deviantart.com/art/Loving-You-40725081 (above picture)

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 26, 2007
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    this is sweet and love how you have added in the flowers into the poem