I can't be sure if this is real
the feelings deep inside,
what i think,
I'm torn between
a creative chinese
and a brilliant brunette,
which one to chose?
I trying to decide
who I think is best,
and I really don't know
who is really the one
I'm going to ask
my friends for help
but i think the decision,
needs to be inside my self,
who to choose?
why can't I decide?
it should have been easy,
why is it so hard?
Author notes
I never imagined a decision like this to be so hard, i find myself thinking about this even when i try not to.
help......please?
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I like this. Decisions, decisions. Life is made up of such. I like the way you indecision comes through on this piece. Well done.
Wayne
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I like this poem a lot, so you're trying to decide where to classify yourself? haha just kidding, but I like how you spaced out the poem and didn't rhyme it, I think it works better. Nice job!
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i guess you could say that, *chuckle* but really, why does it have to be this darn hard!?
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wait,so are you really trying to decide between brunette or chinese?
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ok, so u obviously don't get it kt, I like 2 different guys,and I can't decide who i like the best! I know it sounds like i'm trying to decide who I am , but it's about who I like! one is chinese, and the other is a brunette! GET IT?
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ok, so i looked this poem over, and it does look like i am trying to classify myself, but i'm not, i see how u thought that.
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u don't know these guys, i'm not saying any last names! tehe
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well gosh, you don't have to get soo mad!
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