Inside my intellect, understand me, know me, and anticipate me!
Inside my world, vanilla and open, sensual and erotic,
Inside my thoughts, leaving memories of pleasure and pain, resistance and surrender!
Inside my ways, sorting through all my little idiosyncrasies', tweaking the kinks!
Inside my dreams, feelings so intense I awake soaked and exhausted, oh so real!
Inside my fear, confronting it, demanding that I deal with it,!
Inside my masochistic nature, giving me what I crave to satisfy the rage!
Inside my eyes widening them each day, revealing layers of the horizon!
Inside my womanhood, drenching me with commands and demands, dripping!
Inside my lust, the dark consuming fire of desire that emerges with cautious intent!
Inside my curiosity, dangling morsels of decadence to make my mouth water!
Inside my rebellion, spanking, whipping, flogging, oh my! Mmmmm!
Inside my sensuality, delving deep within my coin purse moaning, groaning!
Inside my eroticism, allowing me to express the inner convulsion of fantasy and reality!
Inside my kink....... ya think!
Inside Inside Inside!
Shall W/we?
In a list
A contest entry
- *~(~*(*~A N Y T H I N G !!!~*)~*)~* PW'S allowed! YOUR BEST/ YOUR FAVORITE !!!! CONTEST! SOMETHING I"M GONNA LIKE! by xxlisajazminexx.
500 points, ended September 26, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderfully done. This line right here: "Inside my curiosity, dangling morsels of decadence to make my mouth water!" left me breathless, and tingly in a few places too!
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The dance in delight in the sweet good night. The sensual undercurrent of pain and likeing to remain just within a circle
of someone who knows just how you like to flow and who will drive you over the edge.
Very sensual take.
Love, Tom B.
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appreciate the comment so glad someone else like to flow that way!
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There is a pace and flow. The way the nerves begin to fly and peak and as you cry you sigh until you find yourself against the wall and nothing seems to let you get free. ...
Like a finger dragged through dust. Where is the super strength cleaner when you need it. Vampires are just needs unanswered by people afraid to dream
Love, Tom B.
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I like the way you started off each line as though it were an extension of the title, that added to the effect of the poem. This required deep thoughts...very original!
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thankyou!
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i loved this...such vivid, real, emotions...The style is so orginal. i truly enjoyed the read!
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thankyou sweetly
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i love this baby you have such a different style of writing and everone say i have a crazy style i love your style i am a very big huge fan of yours i think you rather know that but this was hot good luck in the contest honey
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U ain't crazy just original baby!!
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very lovely and raw .......
penned beautifully......
full of life and very vivid indeed......
suble but naughty.....
wonderfully written!
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my pleasure hun glad you liked it
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