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Like Me

Its guns in the closet
and blood in the seat.
Who would have ever guessed?
Someone could do a thing like me.

Tears drowned my pillow that night,
I wiped them all away.
I prepared my clothes; my makeup...
For just another day.

The horror to my surprise,
spread across the street.
I put on my sad little face,
When I really thought it neat.

The ceremony was a pity,
I watched him as he cried.
He never would have done that,
If I was the one who died.

The pain seemed to carry on,
each day at school was dark.
Id try my best to egnore it all,
I leave and sit at our park.

It was there that you expressed your love,
You said we'd always be.
Until I killed that dumb bitch,
You'd never look at me.

Now I am your shoulder to cry on,
Once again I'm back in my place.
If only you knew I killed her,
You should have seen the look on her face.

It happened all so fast,
It went almost like a blurr.
One second I went bullistic,
The next I stared down at her.

Her body was layed so graceful,
Down on the wooden floor.
I took one last look at her,
"You dirty little Whore."

Now all I can do is walk around,
with my head held high.
Thats right, I won you bitch,
I finally got my guy.

Its guns in the closet
and blood in the seat.
Who would have ever guessed?
Someone could do a thing like me.

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  • tabbykat10988
    October 2, 2007

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    this is fantastic... the words flow gracefully from one to the next... and it also shows that jealousy to the extreme can cause people to do horrible things... and pushes them to the edge.. great job and good luck in the contest...
    -tk


  • Rachel21
    September 25, 2007
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    HORRIFYING:D

    HAHA! That was great!