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Princess of Darkness

On a cold and stormy night in the woods,
She is out there watching in the darkness.
That is where she is most comfortable,
For the woods are her home
And darkness is her namesake.
Don't go into her home,
For you will never leave.
She is the Princess of Darkness,
Creature of the night.
She is waiting for you.

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  • movedon
    June 20, 2008
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    Scary.


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  • onesugar gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    .... sugar peeks through her fingers. Has she gone yet?

    Great write! Love it.

    Good Luck!

    Love ~sugar~


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 28, 2007

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    shhh something is out there!...I do love the feelings you are sending in this piece...Scary~ She is the Princess of darkness, Creature of the night...Love it...Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest


  • whatever666
    September 27, 2007

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    Amazed

    Short, sweet, mysterious, and to the point, I love it. You did an excellent job, keep up the great work.


  • esroddo silver member
    September 26, 2007

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    Wow this is super dark

    Kinda eery and intriguing, I love how you wrote it with the warning, Great write. Thank you for entering and good luck LISA

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